This is another occasion when readers’ comments on the last
post were just too good for a cursory response from me.
For those who came here seeking a new poem today, here is
Anne Marie Macari’s short, but probably not simple “From the Plane.” From the Plane by
Anne Marie Macari : American Life in Poetry Feel free to comment on it, of course, or to say more about “Filling
Station.” I hope to look at more of Macari’s work in the future.
Now, back to your comments on “Filling Station.” (By the
way, note the possible word play:
it’s not a gas station or service station, but a place where things get
filled).
Barbaro, I thought I'd offered the poem before, then couldn't
find it (still can’t), so I went ahead and posted it. Clearly you did hear the tone that was troubling me. Maybe
you heard it even louder. Whether or not others agree with you, your strong, fine comment
would be hard to dismiss.
Among all the visitors’ comments last time, there are several
fascinating beginnings. Beginning with Birdman, the issue of life vs. the art arose again, so
here’s a quick link to Wikipedia’s bio of Elizabeth Bishop. I’ll let each reader
decide how entitled her life seems.
We need to pay attention to Pasadena Adjacent's point about the
"hidden female" in the poem. Is that what the poem is about? Is it
above all else a feminist poem?
Also, we musn’t gloss over PA’s point that our reactions to
the poem (any poem?) say more about us than they say about the poem. The idea
is so huge and complicated that I wonder if we could somehow make it a
stipulation in all criticism about literature and art: who are you, Mr./Ms. Commentator. Where
do you come from, in the largest senses of those words, and why have you come here?
Or is that so huge and complicated that it becomes, by
default, a defense of The New Criticism’s elimination of all factors other than
the art object itself. We must ignore the lives of the commentators just as we
ignore the lives of the writers and artists.
I’m interested in Gothpunkuncle's thought that the poem’s potentially
offending tone might result from a strategy by Bishop: make us feel our own
classism by feeling the speaker’s. And certainly that last line could be a step
back from what was gentle mockery: “Somebody loves us all,” even among the
grease. Or it could be the most mocking line of all.
Brenda, although Bishop did some teaching, it's indeed
interesting to wonder what she thought about teachers, students, and the
process. Do teachers fill gas tanks and spill things, make messes, live and
work in some kind of metaphorical grease?
Stickup Artist, I have the same soft spot. In a town I knew in the 1950s
and 1960s, Cap Johnson's Sohio station on the town square was a standard place
for a Coke if the day was hot, or if we were too sweaty for a drugstore Coke
after an afternoon of pickup basketball in Arnie Snider’s driveway. I recall absolutely no sense of class
distinction among us, toward ourselves or our elders’ ways of
making a living. If Cap told us not to do that, we stopped. It was understood
that he spoke for our parents, as well as every other merchant on the square,
plus the sheriff, whose jail was two doors away, just this side of The Roxy. And don’t even ask about Woody Renrock’s shoe repair shop;
the smell of that leather was better than any pipe tobacco--yes, even Kentucky Club.
Maybe Hillary Clinton created or exploited the aphorism, “It
takes a village,” but the idea is very old. It's not all sweetness and light, but it's worth a long, hard look.
I wonder if we’d have chosen to buy anything from this Elizabeth Bishop lady.
Elizabeth Bishop - Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia
From the Plane by Anne Marie Macari : American Life in Poetry
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wonderful reccolection
ReplyDeleteThanks, Ken. It's tricky but fun trying to write about such stuff.
ReplyDeleteI read through the poem again. Saw beyond the description - what might be judged as judgement. Which made my "feminist" reading all the more valid.
ReplyDeleteYes PA, move to the front of the class
mommy loves them all....even if she's missing
Although the old Liz (this Liz) still holds a grudge against those Mormon greece monkeys at the Standard station in Green River Utah, who gouged the young 19 year old Liz once (through fear and intimidation to purchase four new UNNECESSARY tires.) Then tried to pull the same stunt the next year.
RE: Macari's poem. I'm glad she told us what it was about in her title. I had no idea, until her line about the 'funnel of air'. I like that...
ReplyDeleteI'll have to think about this Bishop poem. I use Questions of Travel in the class I teach...it's an interesting and weird one (there is also a gas station in it).
ReplyDeleteBut goodness, I didn't know the plane poem...thank you for sharing this! I love this one.